2016-04-15
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1）A young man had a small business.
2）He works very hard, and he made a lot of money.
3）One day, he had dinner with a businessman.
4）He wanted the man become his business partner.
5）When they finished the dinner,
6）there were two dumplings left.
7）The young man telled the waitress: 'Please pack them at a doggy bag and I'd like taking them home.'
8）Soon the businessman decided working together with the young man.
9）He said, 'The young man is great.
10）He have lots of money but he won't waste it.'
我的选择：
找茬答案： 2 , 4 , 7 , 8 , 10 ,
大家的选择结果！其中（√）为正确句子，（×）为错误句子。
1
4.2%
2
17.4%
3
3.1%
4
17.6%
5
2.2%
6
3.1%
7
17.4%
8
14.7%
9
2%
10
18.3%
学习者求助
求助一：I feel like…、I would like to…和I want…在意义和用法上有什么区别?求助二：请指出第七句错误，写出依据并将正确句式写出。
精选解答
王亚茹
2016-04-15 21:00:35
2）He works very hard, and he made a lot of money. (×)
works→worked. 一般过去时态
4）He wanted the man become his business partner. (×)
Become前加to。 Want sb to do sth.
7）The young man telled the waitress: 'Please pack them at a doggy bag and I'd like taking them home.' (×)
telled→told.
at→in, 把两个饺子放进打包袋里，用in。
taking→to take. would like to do sth.
8）Soon the businessman decided working together with the young man. (×)
Working→work， decide to do sth, 决定做某事。
10）He have lots of money but he won't waste it.' (×)
have →has, 主语三单。
works→worked. 一般过去时态
4）He wanted the man become his business partner. (×)
Become前加to。 Want sb to do sth.
7）The young man telled the waitress: 'Please pack them at a doggy bag and I'd like taking them home.' (×)
telled→told.
at→in, 把两个饺子放进打包袋里，用in。
taking→to take. would like to do sth.
8）Soon the businessman decided working together with the young man. (×)
Working→work， decide to do sth, 决定做某事。
10）He have lots of money but he won't waste it.' (×)
have →has, 主语三单。
张忠伟
2016-04-15 18:36:55
2.works改成worked，全文皆用过去时态，上下文时态要一致；4.He wanted the businessman become改成He wanted the businessman to become，want to do sth是固定搭配；7.pack them at 改成pack them in，这里用bag 打包用in；taking改成to take，would like to do sth用法8.decided working改成decided to work是固定搭配；10.have改成has，he是三单形式。求助一：i feel like doing，I would like to do sth和I want都是想要做某事的意思，但是个人觉得I would like to do sth语气委婉点，I want to语气比较硬，I feel like doing只是想法；求助二：The young man telled the waitress: 'Please pack them in a doggy bag and I'd like to take them home.' at改成in，用什么打包，would like taking改成would like to take，礼貌委婉的表达。
邓文礼Ink
2016-04-15 20:29:43
i feel like doing 我想做 feel like接名词 物质名词it feels like rain soon。this kind of brick feels like wood。i don't feel like myself today .i feel like that i have never watched the movie .
i would like to do 我想做 i want to eat a piece of bread ,i would like to eat a piece of bread 。表示想要层度不同。
the young man told the waitress 'please pack them in a doggy bag and i 'd like to take them home "
i would like to do 我想做 i want to eat a piece of bread ,i would like to eat a piece of bread 。表示想要层度不同。
the young man told the waitress 'please pack them in a doggy bag and i 'd like to take them home "
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